the draft by Thalea and Javier

The Evil Trap

Once a upon a time, there was a couple named Josh and Sharon. Josh said to Sharon " We're going to a party." When Josh and Sharon are going to the party they ride a bus. 

They ask the drivers name and he said "My name is Crusher." Then Josh and Sharon relised that name was evil. Then Crusher press a button that is putting them in a ball. Then Crusher put them in a ball's room. And the ball's room is a trap. Crusher is an evil man who like crush a ball. So they are in great danger. Crusher made a machine to crush. The machine is made out of metal and it's spiky like a hair of a hedgehog. The ball was pulled by a magnet. They struggle for their lives. Then Josh got an idea,  "We should work together, run as fast as we can." So they start running together and rolling the ball away from the machine. After they got away from the trap, they go to the party quickly. When they got to the party, the party is almost finished. But, when they look back, Crusher is actually there and chasing them. Josh and Sharon run to the crowd. They see their friends. Their friends are surprised because Josh and Sharon are inside the ball. They see Crusher chasing Josh and Sharon. They help Josh and Sharon to escape. Then together they chase Crusher. Crusher is afraid and running away. But the securities, capture Crusher first. Josh and Sharon are safe. And they are continuing the party. The End

character:Crusher,Josh,Sharon

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